Team+presentation

= Links for positive discrimination =

Presentation

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 * General comments**

//Communication// Good presentation of plan at start (slide 2) and good transitions between speakers. More dynamism (courage) and imagination would have helped to involve the audience.

//Slides// Sober but clear. The parallelism of the pro and con slides was not apparent to me at the time - could you have made the contrast clearer? Too many grammar errors.

//Content// A very formal debate which did not engage the audience very well: perhaps we needed more concrete examples and moral issues.


 * Specific comments**

Slide 1 (Elsa) Nice clear delivery, but many errors in expression.

as she said discrimination positive > positive discrimination I'm going to define you this term > I'm going to define this term for you (you should count in English)

Slide 3 (Marie) You were quite fluent, but many key words are mispronounced.

discriminated citizens law young women
 * the term** positive discrimination was created

Slide 4 (Muriel) You sound bright and engaged at the start, then become a little more hesitant. It is not always easy to understand your point and your points sound like an unordered list instead of a structured series.

developing government

Slide 5 (Audrey) Good speed but perhaps a little too quiet.

womans > women

Slide 6 (Elsa) You were more relaxed at the end and sounded more fluent. You could have done more with the survey result - asked individuals why they voted as they did.

our point of view is mixed > our position is somewhere between the two extremes

__Slide Corrections__ Slide 1: 'The' not needed Slide 2: promote__s__ / __to__ promote increase__s__ / __to__ increase Slide 3: __the__ USA descendant__s__ __of__ slave__s__ and those who were discriminated __against__ __the__ UK __on__ 10__th__ Slide 4: pros __of__ positive discrimination allow__s__ __education__, NOT instruction job__s__ / the workplace politic__s__ Slide 5: cons __of__ job__s__ / the workplace politic__s__ prejudice will always exist __within__ companies Slide 6: help__s__ people in the minority someone will always be discriminated __against__ Slide 7: Do you have any questions?